They thought that using the variety of colours was good, but maybe a bit too bright on the use of colour. They felt that my layout of the work was good and that it was to crowd in one place and too little in another place. The photographs were good and there was a wide range of photographs. The photographs were aimed at the target audience, which meant that they didn’t have to be flash. The contents information went with the magazine that was created. They thought that the magazine was very well presented and done. They like that I have placed the photographs on the page a different places. Found that using a welcome message was good in the contents page. In the double page spread they like the fact that I used a white background behind the colourful article. When looking at the videos from my audience feedback you can see that the people that I asked to give me audience feedback felt that my pages looked very Professional and well presented. However they did feel that the magazine wasn't for them, but they did like the work that I had created.
They feel that I could make a few changes on my front cover. They feel that the title should be made bigger and the cover lines shouldn’t have a colour background behind the cover line. On the contents page the writing in the box could be change to black because they found it difficult to read.
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